Comments on: CROSS COUNTRY http://haley1.edublogs.org/2008/06/13/cross-country/ Just another Edublogs.org weblog Fri, 24 Oct 2008 10:06:33 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: Melissa http://haley1.edublogs.org/2008/06/13/cross-country/comment-page-1/#comment-29 Melissa Tue, 14 Oct 2008 12:15:31 +0000 http://haley1.edublogs.org/?p=32#comment-29 Hi im Melissa and im Alex, I am 10 years old and im from rochdale i have to sisters called Josie and Demi.i have blonde hair and i have a couison called Alex who is in my class at school my bestfriends are gabriella a girl called lucy my birthday is on may the 12th. now this is me alexs life !! hi im 10 and i av a bro called ross see-yaa!! Hi im Melissa and im Alex,
I am 10 years old and im from rochdale i have to sisters called Josie and Demi.i have blonde hair and i have a couison called Alex who is in my class at school my bestfriends are gabriella a girl called lucy my birthday is on may the 12th. now this is me alexs life !!

hi im 10 and i av a bro called ross see-yaa!!

]]> By: AllStars http://haley1.edublogs.org/2008/06/13/cross-country/comment-page-1/#comment-19 AllStars Fri, 20 Jun 2008 11:39:23 +0000 http://haley1.edublogs.org/?p=32#comment-19 Quite a basic recount Haley - I'm sure that the day was more exciting than this! How did you feel before the race - were you nervous/worried/or confident? How about while you were racing - did you get tired, was it a long way, what were your tactics? After the race - were you pleased with your effort? were you tired/thirsty/happy/relieved? What did you think while you were watching the other kids race? Would you like to represent your school again? I know that you have much more to say about your experiences at the Carnival - why not share what you were thinking and feeling rather than just telling us what you did? Please remember to get two friends to check your work before me (MrsP) BEFORE you publish your writing. 3 *** quality work always :) MrsP Quite a basic recount Haley – I’m sure that the day was more exciting than this!
How did you feel before the race – were you nervous/worried/or confident?

How about while you were racing – did you get tired, was it a long way, what were your tactics?

After the race – were you pleased with your effort? were you tired/thirsty/happy/relieved?

What did you think while you were watching the other kids race? Would you like to represent your school again?

I know that you have much more to say about your experiences at the Carnival – why not share what you were thinking and feeling rather than just telling us what you did?

Please remember to get two friends to check your work before me (MrsP) BEFORE you publish your writing. 3 *** quality work always :)

MrsP

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